Thursday, November 12, 2009

せんりゅう 2

トコトコりょう
とてもこわいよ
いぬですね

2 comments:

  1. トコトコもおもしろいonomotopeiaですね!

    I think the interesting part of this senryu
    is that we are not really sure if the walking
    sound トコトコ is made by the person who is looking
    at the dog or by the dog himself.

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  2. Yes, that's exactly what I intended!!
    Thank you for understanding my senryu!

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